Lessons Learned and Applied

Imperial Arms · 04-12-2007, 09:17 AM

Hello Kevin,

Based on the amount of text you wrote on your story and description, you are definitely 'hooked'! The best sentence you used above was "I never believed that a gun could be seductive" - neither did I! You make it sound like the gun induced and came after you in a romantic way! Believe it or not, the gun has power which can effect you in the most unexpected way!

I enjoyed your writing/story and welcome to the hobby.

Cheers,
Albert

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04-12-2007, 09:17 AM	#7
Imperial Arms Banned Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: Malta, EU Posts: 579 Thanks: 0 Thanked 7 Times in 7 Posts	Hello Kevin, Based on the amount of text you wrote on your story and description, you are definitely 'hooked'! The best sentence you used above was "I never believed that a gun could be seductive" - neither did I! You make it sound like the gun induced and came after you in a romantic way! Believe it or not, the gun has power which can effect you in the most unexpected way! I enjoyed your writing/story and welcome to the hobby. Cheers, Albert