Hello Kevin,
Based on the amount of text you wrote on your story and description, you are definitely 'hooked'! The best sentence you used above was "I never believed that a gun could be seductive" - neither did I! You make it sound like the gun induced and came after you in a romantic way! Believe it or not, the gun has power which can effect you in the most unexpected way!
I enjoyed your writing/story and welcome to the hobby.
Cheers,
Albert
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